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Sorry,Loquas, English is not my primary language, so it's difficult to always keep the Style Guide's strict american form... Yes, I've read it, but unfortunately, i can't do the Firefox download, because this is not my computer - I'm at hospital with an advance laptop in a foreign country - should I stop editing the Discovery Wiki pages?
 
Sorry,Loquas, English is not my primary language, so it's difficult to always keep the Style Guide's strict american form... Yes, I've read it, but unfortunately, i can't do the Firefox download, because this is not my computer - I'm at hospital with an advance laptop in a foreign country - should I stop editing the Discovery Wiki pages?
  
It's ok. English is not my mother tongue either, but I try hard (as you do) to write understandable text. That means reading and re-reading it before and after I submit it. Your sentences are too long (it's hard to follow what you are trying to say) and grammar is not the best. The spelling errors are easier to correct, but grammatical errors can be hard to spot. Unless you can write understandable text I think it's better for you not to write pages. Sorry if I sound a bit harsh, but it makes other wiki editor's work-amount to go up significantly if we have to read through every single article you write. Well, I said that now. I know you feel hurt now, BUT HOWEVER we need more people on-board and we seriously need a images to the pages. Can you play the FL? Even single player? '''It would be a tremendous help if you could take it on you to read articles and get pictures for them.''' Could you do this? Not make articles but go and find (or take pictures) for the existing articles? Take a look for example [[Hazardous_Areas]], [[Jump Gate]] and other articles and you'll get the idea. Let us know and we'll get you started with how to do this. Get well soon!
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It's ok. English is not my mother tongue either, but I try hard (as you do) to write understandable text. That means reading and re-reading it before and after I submit it. Your sentences are too long (it's hard to follow what you are trying to say) and grammar is not good either. The spelling errors are easier to correct, but grammatical errors can be hard to spot. Unless you can write understandable text I think it's better for you not to write pages. Sorry if I sound a bit harsh, but it makes other wiki editor's work-amount to go up significantly if we have to read through every single article you write. Well, I said that now. I know you feel hurt now, BUT HOWEVER we need more people on-board and we seriously need images to the pages. Can you play the FL? Even single player? '''It would be a tremendous help if you could take it on you to read articles and get pictures for them.''' Could you do this? Not make articles but go and find (or take pictures) for the existing articles? Take a look for example [[Hazardous_Areas]], [[Jump Gate]] and other articles and you'll get the idea. Let us know and we'll get you started with how to do this. Get well soon!
 
--[[User:Looqas|Looqas]] 09:31, 19 September 2008 (GMT)
 
--[[User:Looqas|Looqas]] 09:31, 19 September 2008 (GMT)

Revision as of 09:34, 19 September 2008

Sorry,Loquas, English is not my primary language, so it's difficult to always keep the Style Guide's strict american form... Yes, I've read it, but unfortunately, i can't do the Firefox download, because this is not my computer - I'm at hospital with an advance laptop in a foreign country - should I stop editing the Discovery Wiki pages?

It's ok. English is not my mother tongue either, but I try hard (as you do) to write understandable text. That means reading and re-reading it before and after I submit it. Your sentences are too long (it's hard to follow what you are trying to say) and grammar is not good either. The spelling errors are easier to correct, but grammatical errors can be hard to spot. Unless you can write understandable text I think it's better for you not to write pages. Sorry if I sound a bit harsh, but it makes other wiki editor's work-amount to go up significantly if we have to read through every single article you write. Well, I said that now. I know you feel hurt now, BUT HOWEVER we need more people on-board and we seriously need images to the pages. Can you play the FL? Even single player? It would be a tremendous help if you could take it on you to read articles and get pictures for them. Could you do this? Not make articles but go and find (or take pictures) for the existing articles? Take a look for example Hazardous_Areas, Jump Gate and other articles and you'll get the idea. Let us know and we'll get you started with how to do this. Get well soon! --Looqas 09:31, 19 September 2008 (GMT)