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Feedback and Character Information

Howdy! Whether you've read something of mine on the forums, interacted with me on the server, or whatever other possible permutation of exposure, I hope it was a positive experience. This is a feedback page and repository for information on all of my characters I have on the server. Feel free to contact me over PM, Skype, or email. Have a great day!



Characters

Royce O'Hannigan
Bretonian Civilian


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Name: Royce O'Hannigan
Occupation: Bowex freighter captain
Nationality: Bretonian
Rank: Lieutenant (BAF, Ret.)
Age: 86
Height: 1.78m (5'10")
Hair Color: Grey
Eye Color: Brown
Weight: 73.9kg (163lbs)
DOB: 11th of February, 739 AS, Planet Leeds, Leeds

Known vessels
  1. Royce.O'Hannigan (Large Train)

Biography


Stories and Articles



Kyōko Honda
Kusari Officer


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Name: Kyōko Honda
Occupation: Imperial Kusari Navy officer
Nationality: Kusari
Rank: Itto-Kaisa, IKN
Age: 32
Height: 1.85m (6'1")
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Brown
Weight: 65.3kg (144lbs)
DOB: 3rd of November, 793 AS, Planet Junyo, Shikoku

Known vessels
  1. IKN-Hiei (in progress)

Biography


Stories and Articles
  1. Ten Thousand Years of the Kusari Republic


Gu Tao
Coalition Officer


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Name: Gu Tao
Occupation: Sirius Coalition Revolutionary Army officer
Nationality: Coalition
Rank: Cadet, SCRA
Age: 22
Height: 1.68m (5'6")
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Brown
Weight: 79.3kg (175lbs)
DOB: 15th of June, 803 AS, Planet Jiangxi, Omega-52

Known vessels
  1. Gu.Tao (Insurgent)

Biography


Stories and Articles


Alaric Favager
Gallic Officer


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Name: Alaric Jean-Paul Favager d'Astier
Occupation: Gallic Royal Navy officer
Nationality: Gallic
Rank: Colonel, GRN
Age: 36
Height: 1.88m (6'2")
Hair Color: Blond
Eye Color: Brown
Weight: 75.3kg (166lbs)
DOB: 21st of April, 789 AS (704 AGS), Planet Marne, Champagne

Known vessels
  1. RNS-Chanzy (in progress)

Biography


Stories and Articles


Ed Kirk
Libertonian Officer


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Name: Edward Dulles Kirk
Occupation: Liberty Navy officer
Nationality: Libertonian
Rank: Commander, LN
Age: 27
Height: 1.68m (5'6")
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Green
Weight: 83.5kg (184lbs)
DOB: 9th of July, 798 AS, Planet Los Angeles, California

Known vessels
  1. LNS-Seattle (in progress)

Biography


Stories and Articles


Rodney O'Hannigan
Bretonian Officer


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Name: Rodney Royce O'Hannigan
Occupation: Bretonian Armed Forces officer
Nationality: Bretonian
Rank: Ensign, BAF
Age: 23
Height: 1.68m (5'6")
Hair Color: Ginger
Eye Color: Light blue
Weight: 76.2kg (168lbs)
DOB: 2nd of August, 802 AS, Planet New London, New London

Known vessels
  1. BAF|R.O'Hannigan (Templar)

Biography


Stories and Articles
I've just caught sight of your in-progress story, Ten Thousand Years of the Kusari Republic, and seeing a nice big feedback link in your signature, thought I'd come chip in as this thread is sadly empty!

I'm really enjoying the story so far, and I think it's fantastically written. The characters are engaging and you're particularly good at conveying their moods and atmospheres. Keep it up! I can't wait to read further and see where Kyoko's adventures take her and the crew of the Chokai. You can consider me an interested reader who'll eagerly follow your work Smile. I'm especially fond of your attention to detail with ranks, names, procedure etc. - it just makes the story all that more immersive!

Great work!
- V.
Thanks muchly for the kind words! I admit I've relegated the story to languish for quite some time - I expected many, many more chapters of this story would be done by this time when I began many moons ago - but I'm feeling better about getting into the groove, so that means more updates, and longer ones.

I hope you like where the story will take them, and I hope whatever prowess I have continues to deliver to your satisfaction. Thanks again for chiming in!
That's a cool story right there. I enjoyed reading it. Although, you may try to give it some deeper formatting, eg. highlighting the spoken parts with different shade of color and may e dropping a picture there and there (: