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Hi guys and girls of the Disco Community. I thought it may be a good idea for a feedback thread made for my stories and bio's that I will be creating. I am in the middle of writing a few up, but here are a few I have already done.

Please take a look and give me some feedback of what you think.

No hate, just positive feedback of any.

Thanks Shaggy

Character List

Primary Characters
Name	Origin	Faction/Group	Status
Claire Chandler	Bretonian	Crayter Republic	Active
Agent Frank Sinclair	Liberty	Bounty Hunter Guild	Active
Rosalina Romanov	Liberty	Independant	Active
Secondary Characters
Name	Origin	Faction/Group	Status
Amethyst	Edge World	Crayter Republic	On call
Stephanie Chaple	Edge World	Crayter Republic	On call
Ryan Larkin	Edge World	Crayter Republic	On call
Duke Johnson	Edge World	Crayter Republic	On call
James Smith	Edge World	Crayter Republic	On call
Eliza Jonas	Bretonia	Crayter Republic	On call
Agent Sharp	Edge World	Crayter Republic	On call
Emily Harper	Bretonian	Division Nine	On call
Mark Webb	Liberty	The Order	On call
Nathalie Yang	Kusari	Blood Dragon	On call
Abandoned Characters
Name	Origin	Faction/Group	Status
Izumi Ichihara	Kusari	Kishiro Technologies	Abandoned
Rosai Rai Rei	Kusari	Sisterhood of Dreams	Abandoned
Ramsey	Kusari	The Archangels Fighters Club	Abandoned
Marcus Kane	Bretonia	Mollies	Abandoned
Cara Kendall	Bretonia	The Fallen Angels	Abandoned
Jade Roberts	Bretonia	Bretonian Armed Forces and Gallic Royal Navy	Abandoned
Liberty Roberts	Bretonia	Bretonian Armed Forces	Abandoned
Alexandra Mckenzie	Edge Worlds	IMG	Abandoned
Ross Mckenzie	Edge Worlds	IMG	Abandoned
Uncle Dave	Edge Worlds	IMG	Abandoned
Santos Benitez	Corsair	Benitez and [TBH]	Abandoned
Penelope Rodriquez	Corsair	[TBH]	Abandoned
Kieran Walker	Omicrons	Omicroners and Pheonix	Abandoned
Tyler Hall	Liberty	Junker Congress	Abandoned
Michael Knight	Liberty	Knight Industries	Abandoned
Daryl Robinson	Liberty	Liberty Navy	Abandoned
James O'Brian	Liberty	Liberty Police Inc	Abandoned
Tomas Karpov	Coalition	SCRA	Abandoned
Finley Kohan	Rheinland	Rheinland Military	Abandoned
Dimitri Vegas	Rheinland	Red Hessian Army	Abandoned
[?]Loki	Unknown	[?] Etherium	Abandoned
A'res	Nomad	Nomad	Abandoned
Wayne Davidson	Edge World	Crayter Republic	Abandoned
Lauren Shaw	Edge World	Liberty	Abandoned

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Emily Harper RP and Back story has been updating. Please give me thoughts and feedback on her.

So I have recently tried starting a few things from scratch but it never worked. So I have decided I will write up some forum character bio's. They are not yet finished and missing a big chunk of RP for them, but can you please let me know how they are, how they read, look and the RP behind them. Some of you may recognize the names.

Thanks

You should do a more clear story on Loki. Like what is he/she exactly because he/she seems alien to me

Thanks Darius, Loki is a "Alien" but a very unique specie. The specie lives of and needs "Iridium" to survive, and with recent updates there is only one place to get "Iridium" from, and that is Freeport 11 in Omicron Delta. The mining field was taken out in a earlier mod from Omicron Delta also which made the faction struggle but hopefully the faction will be back if not I will continue this character on solo and one of the only Etherium left alive within the Sirius Sector.

There is a new story going on between a former 5th| Navy char which is now gone "Rogue" but is flying under the Lane Hacker IFF and ID

Cheers buddy.

Why are you still here?

Why not?