01-17-2016, 11:59 AM
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General
Character Name: Jack Smith
Gender: male
age: mid 20's
Affiliations: Freelancers, Rheinland Civilians, Outcasts, Nomads, Bretonian Mining and Fabrication, Bretonian Armed Forces
Professions: Servant and disciple of the Nomads, Freelance smuggler, employed by Outcasts, member of BMF, recruit in BAF Auxiliary Fleet
Social
Personality: Amiable, at least towards those he does not view as an obstacle.
Alignment: chaotic neutral
Philosophy: Every servant has his place, no matter how lowly or modest. To know it is his greatest comfort, to excel within it is his greatest solace, and his master's contentment is his greatest reward.
Strengths: Skilled pilot, knowledgeable in the methods of travelling through space and the secrets to be found in it.
History
Early: Born and raised in various locations around the outer rim of sirius by a man who found him abandoned as a baby, when he came of age he was provided with a transport by his caretaker and has since made his way through life by hauling certain merchandise and commodities between the houses of sirius and the people of the outer rim.
Recent/current: Found work as a smuggler for the outcasts hauling cardamine to rheinland and bringing back valuable munitions, came across a nomad vessel while leaving Malta, the nomad telepathically communicated that it would follow and observe his delivery of cardamine to rheinland, almost ran into some trouble with the rheinland military once they arrived at new berlin, the nomad diverted their attention allowing him to escape, afterwards over several unexpected meetings with the nomad and several of its companions he slowly become devout to the nomads, possibly due to a combination of being saved by one, minor exposure to cardamine, and the telepathy that they use to communicate.
As a largey autonomous disciple to the nomads he decided it would be useful to have stronger contacts within the houses of sirus if he was ever to be of any use to his nomad masters, with that thought in mind he contacted BMF's recruitment channel and applied to join under the guise of a comfortably rich outer rim trader, after being accepted and securing his new position as a member of BMF he joined the bretonian auxiliary fleet in the name of protecting the people and property of bretonia.
General
Character Name: Jack Smith
Gender: male
age: mid 20's
Affiliations: Freelancers, Rheinland Civilians, Outcasts, Nomads, Bretonian Mining and Fabrication, Bretonian Armed Forces
Professions: Servant and disciple of the Nomads, Freelance smuggler, employed by Outcasts, member of BMF, recruit in BAF Auxiliary Fleet
Social
Personality: Amiable, at least towards those he does not view as an obstacle.
Alignment: chaotic neutral
Philosophy: Every servant has his place, no matter how lowly or modest. To know it is his greatest comfort, to excel within it is his greatest solace, and his master's contentment is his greatest reward.
Strengths: Skilled pilot, knowledgeable in the methods of travelling through space and the secrets to be found in it.
History
Early: Born and raised in various locations around the outer rim of sirius by a man who found him abandoned as a baby, when he came of age he was provided with a transport by his caretaker and has since made his way through life by hauling certain merchandise and commodities between the houses of sirius and the people of the outer rim.
Recent/current: Found work as a smuggler for the outcasts hauling cardamine to rheinland and bringing back valuable munitions, came across a nomad vessel while leaving Malta, the nomad telepathically communicated that it would follow and observe his delivery of cardamine to rheinland, almost ran into some trouble with the rheinland military once they arrived at new berlin, the nomad diverted their attention allowing him to escape, afterwards over several unexpected meetings with the nomad and several of its companions he slowly become devout to the nomads, possibly due to a combination of being saved by one, minor exposure to cardamine, and the telepathy that they use to communicate.
As a largey autonomous disciple to the nomads he decided it would be useful to have stronger contacts within the houses of sirus if he was ever to be of any use to his nomad masters, with that thought in mind he contacted BMF's recruitment channel and applied to join under the guise of a comfortably rich outer rim trader, after being accepted and securing his new position as a member of BMF he joined the bretonian auxiliary fleet in the name of protecting the people and property of bretonia.