07-08-2009, 01:28 PM
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For a long time now, the possibility of "alternate realities" has interested the human race. Each possible decision in life branching off and creating another universe. So many things could change with just one different decision. The human race could of been destroyed. The human race could of turned into the dominant species of the Universe. Or a car could of been bought in a different colour. Or maybe one human decided to get a dog instead of a cat. Every possible decision and action leads to the creation of another Universe. It's interesting how one thing could change so much. Imagine a world where the Nazis won World War II, or where the human race didn't find the Americas for another hundred years.
For one particular reality, one small decision that was made wrong cost the lives of every living thing in a Galaxy, soon to be a Universe.
The year is 2057 A.D, and the human race is finally sending probes to other planets. One planet is found, and from that planet the enemy emerges.
[font=Fixedsys]Year: 2057 A.D.
"The probe is almost at the planet sir." A young technician said to his commanding officer, General Hank McArthur of the United States of America.
"Maybe this one will be able to support life, eh guys?" His voice was filled with a spark of hope. He could see a war coming, and although he doubted he would be alive to see it, he hoped he could play a small part of moving away before it starts. The response to his question was a low grumbling from each person.
"Twenty-eighth planet the charm." One said, sarcasm filling his voice.
But the General failed to notice it, and took it as a positive remark.
"Indeed, now how long before it arrives?"
The technician checked his bank of monitors and gave a neutral look to the General.
"Were in orbit above the planet sir, scanes are starting now." The room went quiet and all that could be heard was the sound of the instruments beeping. All of the personel gathered to the monitors, which would shortly broadcast what the probe was seeing. A few tense moments passed where nothing happened. Then the probe came to life and the camera was activated. What was showed disappointed all in the room.
The planet in question was covered with lava flows, obviously uninhabited and obviously incapable of holding life anyway. The sun was a dark shade of red, possibly nearing the end of it's life and deadly radiation spilling from it is also killing the planet.
"So much for planet number twenty-eight." A technician mumbled.
The technician who was controlling the probe suddenly started frantically pressing buttons on his console. His eyes were alive with activity and he looked like he would burst from the suprise.
"Get over here!" He exclaimed loudly.
"What is it?" Asked the General.
"I've got something on the radar sir, it's a ship."
The Generals face instantly lit up. A possibility of alien life being discovered? He was thrilled with the prospect and instantly ordered the technician to point the camera at the ship. The monitors burst into life again and showed the object heading for the probe.
"I'm showing a basic scan of the ship on one of the monitors now." The lead technician said. Seconds later one monitor went black, then returned to life with a spinning 3D image of the foreign object. It appeared to take a shape similar to a squid. It's tenticles were held behind it and moved continuously, creating some sort of thrust.
"It's increasing in speed sir, heading for the probe." He read his instruments again. "It's on a collision course sir!" The ship increased speed, and at the last second expanded it's tenticles out, wrapping the ship in it's metal skeleton.
"It's doing something sir, should I cut systems on the probe?"
[font=Century Gothic]In our reality the General orders the systems cut, saving the human race. But not this time.
"Lets see what it's doing." He replied, interest filling his mind as he tried to discover what it was the ship was doing. Suddenly, the monitors turned off. Every monitor in the room went dark. Then they returned, a new message written on their screens.
D-E-S-T-R-O-Y, D-E-S-T-R-O-Y, D-E-S-T-R-O-Y...
The message kept repeating itself, over and over until it filled the screens. Then the monitors went off, and the sound systems came to life. They gave the same message.
D-E-S-T-R-O-Y, D-E-S-T-R-O-Y, D-E-S-T-R-O-Y...
"Shut it down now!" The General ordered.
"It's too late sir, it's take control of the systems."
"What is it?"
"It's a virus, the ship has sent a virus to us."
"Isolate it then." A young technician shouted from the back of the crowd.
"It's too late, we can't stop it."
"We can't let it get out of the base, self destruct."
The monitors returned to life, the message filled with triumph and intent.
T-H-I-S W-O-R-L-D W-I-L-L B-U-R-N, T-H-I-S W-O-R-L-D W-I-L-L B-U-R-N...
Then the room filled with a screach so terrifying even the General's heart was racing faster than it should be able to. The monitors began to explode, one by one the message streamed across the screens until the monitor could take it no more and explode. It continued until only one monitor remained, and what it showed gave all in the room the final message, they were going to die.
S-E-L-F D-E-S-T-R-U-C-T, 4.76
The countdown decreased, and for his final seconds the General muttered.
"I am a leaf in the wind, watch how I soar." Then he closed his eyes and died along with his staff and the hope for the human race.
For a long time now, the possibility of "alternate realities" has interested the human race. Each possible decision in life branching off and creating another universe. So many things could change with just one different decision. The human race could of been destroyed. The human race could of turned into the dominant species of the Universe. Or a car could of been bought in a different colour. Or maybe one human decided to get a dog instead of a cat. Every possible decision and action leads to the creation of another Universe. It's interesting how one thing could change so much. Imagine a world where the Nazis won World War II, or where the human race didn't find the Americas for another hundred years.
For one particular reality, one small decision that was made wrong cost the lives of every living thing in a Galaxy, soon to be a Universe.
The year is 2057 A.D, and the human race is finally sending probes to other planets. One planet is found, and from that planet the enemy emerges.
[font=Fixedsys]Year: 2057 A.D.
"The probe is almost at the planet sir." A young technician said to his commanding officer, General Hank McArthur of the United States of America.
"Maybe this one will be able to support life, eh guys?" His voice was filled with a spark of hope. He could see a war coming, and although he doubted he would be alive to see it, he hoped he could play a small part of moving away before it starts. The response to his question was a low grumbling from each person.
"Twenty-eighth planet the charm." One said, sarcasm filling his voice.
But the General failed to notice it, and took it as a positive remark.
"Indeed, now how long before it arrives?"
The technician checked his bank of monitors and gave a neutral look to the General.
"Were in orbit above the planet sir, scanes are starting now." The room went quiet and all that could be heard was the sound of the instruments beeping. All of the personel gathered to the monitors, which would shortly broadcast what the probe was seeing. A few tense moments passed where nothing happened. Then the probe came to life and the camera was activated. What was showed disappointed all in the room.
The planet in question was covered with lava flows, obviously uninhabited and obviously incapable of holding life anyway. The sun was a dark shade of red, possibly nearing the end of it's life and deadly radiation spilling from it is also killing the planet.
"So much for planet number twenty-eight." A technician mumbled.
The technician who was controlling the probe suddenly started frantically pressing buttons on his console. His eyes were alive with activity and he looked like he would burst from the suprise.
"Get over here!" He exclaimed loudly.
"What is it?" Asked the General.
"I've got something on the radar sir, it's a ship."
The Generals face instantly lit up. A possibility of alien life being discovered? He was thrilled with the prospect and instantly ordered the technician to point the camera at the ship. The monitors burst into life again and showed the object heading for the probe.
"I'm showing a basic scan of the ship on one of the monitors now." The lead technician said. Seconds later one monitor went black, then returned to life with a spinning 3D image of the foreign object. It appeared to take a shape similar to a squid. It's tenticles were held behind it and moved continuously, creating some sort of thrust.
"It's increasing in speed sir, heading for the probe." He read his instruments again. "It's on a collision course sir!" The ship increased speed, and at the last second expanded it's tenticles out, wrapping the ship in it's metal skeleton.
"It's doing something sir, should I cut systems on the probe?"
[font=Century Gothic]In our reality the General orders the systems cut, saving the human race. But not this time.
"Lets see what it's doing." He replied, interest filling his mind as he tried to discover what it was the ship was doing. Suddenly, the monitors turned off. Every monitor in the room went dark. Then they returned, a new message written on their screens.
D-E-S-T-R-O-Y, D-E-S-T-R-O-Y, D-E-S-T-R-O-Y...
The message kept repeating itself, over and over until it filled the screens. Then the monitors went off, and the sound systems came to life. They gave the same message.
D-E-S-T-R-O-Y, D-E-S-T-R-O-Y, D-E-S-T-R-O-Y...
"Shut it down now!" The General ordered.
"It's too late sir, it's take control of the systems."
"What is it?"
"It's a virus, the ship has sent a virus to us."
"Isolate it then." A young technician shouted from the back of the crowd.
"It's too late, we can't stop it."
"We can't let it get out of the base, self destruct."
The monitors returned to life, the message filled with triumph and intent.
T-H-I-S W-O-R-L-D W-I-L-L B-U-R-N, T-H-I-S W-O-R-L-D W-I-L-L B-U-R-N...
Then the room filled with a screach so terrifying even the General's heart was racing faster than it should be able to. The monitors began to explode, one by one the message streamed across the screens until the monitor could take it no more and explode. It continued until only one monitor remained, and what it showed gave all in the room the final message, they were going to die.
S-E-L-F D-E-S-T-R-U-C-T, 4.76
The countdown decreased, and for his final seconds the General muttered.
"I am a leaf in the wind, watch how I soar." Then he closed his eyes and died along with his staff and the hope for the human race.