08-29-2010, 06:07 PM
Post here if you would like. Some of the characters you read about (Jake Talbot is the first) will become their own characters in time (No spoilers though...I won't give away just yet what will happen to him).
I realize that it's nothing new and exciting. Merely the daily drama of a ship and it's crew. But it's a good opportunity to practice my dialogue and plotting skills, since this whole writing thing is kind of what I have always considered myself as. (only published a few short stories and poetry here and there...finally wanting to plunge into the bigger stuff) So any critiques would be greatly appreciated.
You can find the ongoing drama HERE
Paulie
I realize that it's nothing new and exciting. Merely the daily drama of a ship and it's crew. But it's a good opportunity to practice my dialogue and plotting skills, since this whole writing thing is kind of what I have always considered myself as. (only published a few short stories and poetry here and there...finally wanting to plunge into the bigger stuff) So any critiques would be greatly appreciated.
You can find the ongoing drama HERE
Paulie