10-12-2010, 09:16 PM
I recently started a story here. It seems to be going down well based on the views, but given the online format, that's never really been a sound system of feedback. Namely I'm looking for critiques on writing style, plot content and such. Anything that'll help me improve really.
So, if you've read the story, any feedback here would be greatly appreciated. Thank you for your time.
So, if you've read the story, any feedback here would be greatly appreciated. Thank you for your time.