The green you decided to use can't be read on the Deep Blue color scheme.
Also, you miss the dots. The storyline is too concentrate for me, but I find it nice, the second part especially. Also, Rheinland makes your story 40% better. :3
' Wrote:The green you decided to use can't be read on the Deep Blue color scheme.
I agree, it is hard to read.
Do have the most peoples here the blue background? If yes, you should change the font color.