' Wrote:*gets out the BUMP stick and GRAVEDIGGER'S SHOVEL*
New story!
Light as a feather, Heavy as a mountain
Feedback appreciated.
Ca n we keep this-un alive? I really liked the multiperson story thing. And some of my best work was done here.
School's starting Monday, so I'm stuck with posting pre-written Flickers for right now (gotta finish summer assignments:P), but I'll get to work on that one next, OK?
' Wrote:PM me flickers kthxbai.
Nau, read eet liak evereeone else:PNow, whatcha think of it?:P
' Wrote:AH WANT MOAR DONUT!
Nau, ah ees planing ta blow eet up:P
In the spirit of Dab's new thread, BUMPAGE!
Feedback for Zapp.
I think you have talent that can keep growing.
However alot of time the constant priase seeking puts me off.
If you sought praise less it would fall on you more.
Tone down the glory hounding and let your talents show through.
I hope I did not offend. I was just giveing my honest 2 cents. Take care buddy.
Can't believe I just saw this... anyways, I'm not seeking praise, I'm asking if people like/dislike my stories, what I could do to get better, and if they dislike them, why?
And bump:dry:
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