01-15-2012, 08:42 PM
Link to Story
I recently did a full "reboot" on the Nemesis story I started several years ago. Several inconsistencies were causing problems with the story, among those being tied to the "Retribution" saga, while was interesting, was pretty much a dead end and had no point to be apart of said RP.
So I've split the two stories into their own general storylines and changed what Nemesis was when she became self-aware. Instead of being a mining droid that became self-aware, she was a security system aboard a remote research station beyond the "Rim" of Sirian space.
Let me know what you think thus far!
~Leo
P.S. Thanks to Boss for helping with polishing up some of my writing. I can get ahead of myself when writing this stuff and he's been helping me take my time with the story here and there. Much obliged dude!
I recently did a full "reboot" on the Nemesis story I started several years ago. Several inconsistencies were causing problems with the story, among those being tied to the "Retribution" saga, while was interesting, was pretty much a dead end and had no point to be apart of said RP.
So I've split the two stories into their own general storylines and changed what Nemesis was when she became self-aware. Instead of being a mining droid that became self-aware, she was a security system aboard a remote research station beyond the "Rim" of Sirian space.
Let me know what you think thus far!
~Leo
P.S. Thanks to Boss for helping with polishing up some of my writing. I can get ahead of myself when writing this stuff and he's been helping me take my time with the story here and there. Much obliged dude!