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All [Exile] Pilots Know what they need to do know, we discuded this . Thanks for your attention.

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Vice-Admiral Shigeo to all interested;
All Questions are Welcome to satisfy your curiosity or doubts you have.

Moving on a interesting Doubt many Gallic Junkers have, as they enter our ZOI systems, you will be ORDERED to drop any cargo you have for our FLEETS interest, and spare your life upon your cooperation.
Any pilot who denies cooperation will be treated as what they are, GALLIC ALLIES; and military matters will proceed.

*Bows*

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You should expand on the background more. Four lines of text is kinda weak, honestly. Try adding more information, where the Exile Fleet was, why exactly, and in more detail the Exiles and Ronin differ?

Just a few things I see right off the bat. If I find any other feedback, I'll let ya know.

EDIT: What Jammi down there said.

-Jeremy

1) How'd you explain the battlecruiser?
2) Will you be challenging the Ronin for the official spot?

What I meant was, the Kusari battlecruiser was supposedly created and put into front-line service after the Exiles were stranded in Bretonia. That means it's unlikely they'd have any without some sort of explanation.

At the moment we have 1 Battle-Cruiser that we currently use for as our "Flag Ship". We are still in the development process of the [EXILE] faction, but in a slow progress.

I would like to discuss with the faction leaders about:

-More in-depth background on:

• How did we get to Leeds or get pass through?
  
• Why did we decided to be exiled from the Kusari House?
  
• What are the trust that we gained from Bretonia (Queen herself)?
  
• How do we get supplies from our past / previous house we used to be under command orders?
  
• How did we manage to obtain the first Battlecruiser and label it as our Flagship?
  

We could use a Ranking structure list - nothing to fancy, but since we are out of the Kusari Commands, we can try a new set of ranking structure.

Just my 2 cents! Also, Kawaii or Metal Skull, send me a pm for skype contact or if you have a channel open to discuss upon this. I would be glad to help.

-Luis

What is the Roleplay background to how the Battlecruiser came to be the flagship of the Exiles?

Also, all because the leader of the Ronin is an Admin, does not mean they are better for the spot. It just means an Admin is leading it.

Also, while I may not be the best at the Lore of Kusari and Bretonia, I'd be happy to help you guys brainstorm ideas for the points Luis pointed out.

-Jeremy

I have now setup my Exile ship: [Exile]Kiki.Drake - Touketsu VHF but I dont know whats going on with you lot can I be added to the Exile Skype Chat or summin? As I dont know when you guys are active thx BW

Haven't heard much of them here as well.