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Feedback on my RP stories - PlasmaSabre - 11-17-2014
Feel free to post any feedback on my RP stories here.
Current stories:
1: Jason James Kalvin (2 chapters)
2: --coming soon--
RE: Feedback on my RP stories - Darth_Icy - 11-17-2014
Overall good story so far... Maybe could have added a bit more to the fight or at least a bit more insight on the pilot itself... But def. keep it up looking forward to chap. 2
RE: Feedback on my RP stories - PlasmaSabre - 11-17-2014
Thanks
Yeah I'm just getting the bare bones written down at the moment, this is all stuff i have RP'd in game. I will 'flesh it out' a bit more soon. It is supposed to be more of a biography than a story, but i'll try to keep it interesting
Chapter 2 is up now
RE: Feedback on my RP stories - Darth_Icy - 11-17-2014
Chapter 2 was great, loved the details of the base and overall direction of the RP.
RE: Feedback on my RP stories - Shalo - 11-17-2014
Just saw both chapter 1 and chapter 2 , and both seem good.