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Feedback: Chronicles of X. - n00bl3t - 04-27-2010
Well, I am about to start chapter three, right now, so I want to know whether I am on the right track according to people who actually read the text.
I suppose I should say, chapter two was and continues to be boring. At least in my opinion. The name fits. I am setting up the base for the various stories.
Chapter one is nice in my opinion. A backstory of sorts for the Admiral.
Yes, I know the name is extremely long, but that is part of the charm. Just ignore it.
Either way, here are the stories:
* Chronicles of X: Origin.
* Chronicles of X: Foundation.
* Chronicles of X: Fabrication.
Another useful link may be X's wiki page.
Feedback: Chronicles of X. - n00bl3t - 05-02-2010
It must be perfect.
Oh well, hopefully Dusty Lens received my response PM.
Feedback: Chronicles of X. - lw'nafh - 05-02-2010
Stole my nickname.
D:<
Other than that, it looks fine to me.
Feedback: Chronicles of X. - n00bl3t - 05-02-2010
' Wrote:Stole my nickname.
D:<
Other than that, it looks fine to me.
Nickname? XD.
I remember waiting for the in-game character to open up. (Somebody at the time had a character called X, causing a lot of drama.)
Good to hear that.:D
Feedback: Chronicles of X. - lw'nafh - 05-02-2010
*Points at sig*
Think that was me? Seems awfully close.
:laugh:
Feedback: Chronicles of X. - n00bl3t - 05-02-2010
' Wrote:*Points at sig*
Think that was me? Seems awfully close.
:laugh:
XD.
I have seen you in-game before.
Guaranteed to be someone I do not know. Eh.
Writing third chapter as I type.
Feedback: Chronicles of X. - Dusty Lens - 05-03-2010
' Wrote:It must be perfect.
Oh well, hopefully Dusty Lens received my response PM.
Whoops. Just got it. Buried beneath detritus.
Feedback: Chronicles of X. - n00bl3t - 05-05-2010
' Wrote:Whoops. Just got it. Buried beneath detritus.
:mellow:
Feedback: Chronicles of X. - n00bl3t - 08-31-2010
Probably should bump this, especially since the third chapter's first post has been posted. (That, and the rest of the third chapter is incoming.)
Feedback: Chronicles of X. - Jimothy - 08-31-2010
Urm, well, I'm certainly confused, that's for sure, and a tad worried about the 'skills' of these people... Actually scared to meet any of this lot in space...
Although, I have to say, I like the format, much as I can't get my head around all the jumping back and forward through time, it's interesting, considering most people (Myself included) just stick to the basic chronological story. Gave it a certain unique twist. And I have to admit, the characters are built really quite nicely.
Good Job.
(Don't wanna read mine about Tyler Skye do you? Links are here somewhere)