Feedback: Chronicles of X.

[n00bl3t]

Well, I am about to start chapter three, right now, so I want to know whether I am on the right track according to people who actually read the text.

I suppose I should say, chapter two was and continues to be boring. At least in my opinion. The name fits. I am setting up the base for the various stories.

Chapter one is nice in my opinion. A backstory of sorts for the Admiral.

Yes, I know the name is extremely long, but that is part of the charm. Just ignore it.

Either way, here are the stories:

* Chronicles of X: Origin.
* Chronicles of X: Foundation.
* Chronicles of X: Fabrication.

Another useful link may be X's wiki page.

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Anything I say is not intended as offensive, and to try and deliberately misinterpret it as such would be an attempt at trolling via misrepresentation.

It's not a conspiracy, it's localised bias. They're not intelligent enough to form a conspiracy.

[n00bl3t]

It must be perfect.

Oh well, hopefully Dusty Lens received my response PM.

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Anything I say is not intended as offensive, and to try and deliberately misinterpret it as such would be an attempt at trolling via misrepresentation.

It's not a conspiracy, it's localised bias. They're not intelligent enough to form a conspiracy.

[lw'nafh]

Stole my nickname.


D:<


Other than that, it looks fine to me.

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вellυм ѕe ιpѕυм aleт

[n00bl3t]

Stole my nickname.
D:<
Other than that, it looks fine to me.

Nickname? XD.

I remember waiting for the in-game character to open up. (Somebody at the time had a character called X, causing a lot of drama.)

Good to hear that.:D

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Anything I say is not intended as offensive, and to try and deliberately misinterpret it as such would be an attempt at trolling via misrepresentation.

It's not a conspiracy, it's localised bias. They're not intelligent enough to form a conspiracy.

[lw'nafh]

*Points at sig*

Think that was me? Seems awfully close.

:laugh:

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вellυм ѕe ιpѕυм aleт

[n00bl3t]

*Points at sig*

Think that was me? Seems awfully close.

:laugh:

XD.

I have seen you in-game before.

Guaranteed to be someone I do not know. Eh.

Writing third chapter as I type.

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Anything I say is not intended as offensive, and to try and deliberately misinterpret it as such would be an attempt at trolling via misrepresentation.

It's not a conspiracy, it's localised bias. They're not intelligent enough to form a conspiracy.

[Dusty Lens]

It must be perfect.

Oh well, hopefully Dusty Lens received my response PM.

Whoops. Just got it. Buried beneath detritus.

[n00bl3t]

Whoops. Just got it. Buried beneath detritus.

:mellow:

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Anything I say is not intended as offensive, and to try and deliberately misinterpret it as such would be an attempt at trolling via misrepresentation.

It's not a conspiracy, it's localised bias. They're not intelligent enough to form a conspiracy.

[n00bl3t]

Probably should bump this, especially since the third chapter's first post has been posted. (That, and the rest of the third chapter is incoming.)

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Anything I say is not intended as offensive, and to try and deliberately misinterpret it as such would be an attempt at trolling via misrepresentation.

It's not a conspiracy, it's localised bias. They're not intelligent enough to form a conspiracy.

[Jimothy]

Urm, well, I'm certainly confused, that's for sure, and a tad worried about the 'skills' of these people... Actually scared to meet any of this lot in space...
Although, I have to say, I like the format, much as I can't get my head around all the jumping back and forward through time, it's interesting, considering most people (Myself included) just stick to the basic chronological story. Gave it a certain unique twist. And I have to admit, the characters are built really quite nicely.
Good Job.

(Don't wanna read mine about Tyler Skye do you? Links are here somewhere)

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I was formerly know as Spiritar.

It's been a while.