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Gas mask feedback - Llama - 12-14-2010
HERE
Gas mask feedback - Elven - 12-14-2010
As story, looks not bad.
As transmission... Whom's it directed to, and whom's it recorded by?
Gas mask feedback - Ash - 12-14-2010
One or two spelling errors. Just a brush over required really. I like it, but watch where you take it, try not to pull off too many stunts like this one, the Corsica is supposed to be almost inpenetrable. So I suggest you make this one of your bigger jobs. I totally understand your guy is notoriously good at what he does, but nobody's god.
Good job so far man, i'l be following this one.
Gas mask feedback - Llama - 12-14-2010
Thank you to both of you, Basically he is a Mercenary, a damn good one- and the bounty he just did, at that station is what made him famous really.
Whom's it directed to ---- It was discovered and leaked to sirus news.
and whom's it recorded by? Bar 6's Security camera.
MORE SOON!
Gas mask feedback - Glis - 12-14-2010
I liked it, the "Gas Mask" is my kind of guy.:D
As Ash said, a few spelling errors but its understandable, gonna be looking forward to more, and if you don't mind when its done link me the other parts/episodes or whatever.:)
Gas mask feedback - Llama - 12-14-2010
' Wrote:and if you don't mind when its done link me the other parts/episodes or whatever.:)
No probs man.
P.s ( Although Its an RP story, its about time someone wrote a REALLY CREEPY one.... (next one is creepy...er))
Gas mask feedback - Llama - 12-14-2010
GAS MASK 2 IS UP!... Meh, its alright.... *giggles*
Gas mask feedback - Lobster - 12-14-2010
Your sig. It is too big.
Gas mask feedback - Llama - 12-14-2010
' Wrote:Your sig. It is too big.
200 by 750?
Oh well... I cut it down more... For you.
READ MA STORY!
Gas mask feedback - Llama - 12-14-2010
P.s: Yes ther is a character in-game with this RP. his name Is
Gas.Mask (Coulda guessed it hehe)
He is a merc. Feel free to talk to him and creep people out.
He is not hostile. he is not lawful.