Gas mask feedback

[Llama]

HERE

[Elven]

As story, looks not bad.

As transmission... Whom's it directed to, and whom's it recorded by?

[Ash]

One or two spelling errors. Just a brush over required really. I like it, but watch where you take it, try not to pull off too many stunts like this one, the Corsica is supposed to be almost inpenetrable. So I suggest you make this one of your bigger jobs. I totally understand your guy is notoriously good at what he does, but nobody's god.

Good job so far man, i'l be following this one.

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[Llama]

Thank you to both of you, Basically he is a Mercenary, a damn good one- and the bounty he just did, at that station is what made him famous really.



Whom's it directed to ---- It was discovered and leaked to sirus news.


and whom's it recorded by? Bar 6's Security camera.

MORE SOON!

[Glis]

I liked it, the "Gas Mask" is my kind of guy.:D
As Ash said, a few spelling errors but its understandable, gonna be looking forward to more, and if you don't mind when its done link me the other parts/episodes or whatever.:)

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[Llama]

and if you don't mind when its done link me the other parts/episodes or whatever.:)

No probs man.

P.s ( Although Its an RP story, its about time someone wrote a REALLY CREEPY one.... (next one is creepy...er))

[Llama]

GAS MASK 2 IS UP!... Meh, its alright.... *giggles*

[Lobster]

Your sig. It is too big.

[Llama]

Your sig. It is too big.

200 by 750?
Oh well... I cut it down more... For you.
READ MA STORY!

[Llama]

P.s: Yes ther is a character in-game with this RP. his name Is

Gas.Mask (Coulda guessed it hehe)

He is a merc. Feel free to talk to him and creep people out.

He is not hostile. he is not lawful.