The tag is awful, although the name is passable. Scrapping Nomspeak entirely is, IMO, a terrible idea, as is the furthering of what I see as an ongoing general trend towards trying to make the Nomads more fuzzy, understandable, and - dare I say it - downright human, as opposed to keeping them as a primarily antagonistic, mysterious, and outright alien force to counterbalance all the rather twee 'friendly' RP that has already been creeping along inside K'Hara and elsewhere.
There is a balance to be struck between the 'ideal' scenario of Nomads being silent killers who shoot everything on sight, especially considering how poorly this translates to actual gameplay, but I would even rather see a "Saturday morning cartoon villain" take on the Nomads than this sort of strange approach towards building an alien faction almost as if it were some sort of corporation. I can't really get my head around the style of writing used in this thread, even, to use it as an example. Goals like these are better left as implied or at best very vague, in my opinion, not outright stated in a strange blend of clinical and borderline edgy list of bulletpoints that looks like some sort of corporate venture.
I agree that K'Hara has long since hit rock bottom with regards its own quality and how they represent the NPC Nomad faction, but pretty much the only positive point I can see about this proposal is that it intends to challenge K'Hara for that spot of Nomad representatives. The more I look at the details, though, the more I see an even more 'teenage fanfiction'-ish sort of take on the whole shebang that leaves me rolling my eyes.