I'm seeing this for the first time actually. Probably because of your "shameless" bumps:P
Anyhow, I haven't really seen any of your ships ingame so I dunno exactly how your RP works. But, the faction description is very well done and I personally love the idea, especially how the Shadows come all the way from "old Earth" and all.
I possibly might join, the problem being I'm already in too many factions.
As for negative comments, stop hating the noms, we need love too you know.
Q_Q
And, of course, the obvious need of more members. But thats pretty much it, everything else including the idea in general is awesome. I'll try and see if I can somehow make time for another faction and help you out with everything. But I can't really promise anything.