While that interaction did lead to a fun pew, I'd suggest a couple of changes to ensure that interactions are enjoyable for both parties. From a gameplay perspective, I'd suggest not pewing in
an npc gunboat zone, as that does greatly reduce the combat effectiveness of one party. Another thing would be to make sure that you give sufficient time for one to respond to an engagement notice, as the time you gave was not within the rules. On the subject of engagement notices, I could be mistaken but I don't think that you're allowed to give them in another language, but like I said - I could be wrong on that.
Only other feedback on that I could suggest would be to make sure fights are fair and you use proper capitals and language when writing.