' Wrote:Rico, just a little comment about the bar guard. Your description says "Is not happy 'bout the guy on the other side of the gun". Mebbe make him look like that? Make him go all "Rawr growl growl ect". Since right now he looks abit like he's taking target practice inside a bar. Blank, neutral, un-angry-ish.
You're right, I had an idea that he has a kind of "you are no threat, my gun speaks for itself" blank-no-problem-killing whoever was on the other end of the gun but it didn't send that message obviously. I think an elite guard wouldn't have any expression shown on his face - he's trained to just do the job well, without emotions getting in the way. But... I guess this one is more likely to get the message through: .
If the stars should appear one night in a thousand years, how would men believe and adore and preserve for many generations the remembrance of the city of God? - from 'Nightfall' by I. Asimov The Outcasts consider Siniestre Nube a sacred place for several reasons. Early explorers discovered a jumphole within the depths of the cloud that leads to a strange world of ringed stars and strange craft. All ships in the burrial ground are placed facing that hole to honor the Alien Spirits. - An Outcast rumor