The first thing that strikes me about it, though, is that it seems to all be able an excuse to take two of the most popular RPs on the server - Nomad and a love story - and put them together. Now, that doesn't mean it can't be a good RP - it is, in fact - but the basis of the story does matter quite a bit, as that's generally peoples' first impression of it. "What is this all about? Oh, a Nomad love story? Not worth reading." See the problem?
However, having said that, the quality of the writing itself is pretty decent, and I like the way its written in first and third person in various posts. I didn't see much overlapping of first/third person, which I like. The content itself was pretty good, particularly the character personality struggles, and I'll be interested in seeing which direction this character goes in.
You know, now that I look back at it...it never was my intention for it to be a love story. Or a story involving nomads. It all started from my days as an exile from Liberty, a Liberty Navy taged (tag which i soon removed) and merc ided spatial.
I was taken in by a 101st and a SOB who led me to a system i never knew existed, Omicron Alpha and I soon accepted it as my home.
Two months later I first met Telchine and the rp began. I was fascinated of the Keepers roleplay quality and they soon became my favourite faction to rp with.
I helped them fend off attackers, I was rewarded by visions and an artifact.
The days moved on, and I met more and more keepers and it was fun, I traveled around the server with them and learned the written and unwritten rules of rp.
