OK, that was a bit overreacted topic description. Naturally I am curious what do people think about the mini-story. I've always been curious. When I was in grade school I wondered how does it feel when someone faints. So I just tried it. And I wondered about way more crazy things but that's something I'm not going to post here ^^
About the story, I want to thank Zapp for the initial idea and Ironwatsas for filling missing pieces and making it overall more interesting.
Well.. That was a pretty awesome story. Wouldn't mind reading more when/if it comes out.
:)Pros: Now I know what happens when your answer is wrong while you are docking.:DNice attention to your own details. More than one side to the coin = great.
:(Cons: I don't think Ritsuka would be so cooperative while sitting strapped to a chair.
Well written!
EDIT: whoops, I got it wrong. Why the heck did I think that Gaians don't like Kusari? :wacko:
' Wrote::(Cons: Ritsuka shouldn't trust the Kusari gov't since he is ultimately working against them. I don't think Ritsuka would be so cooperative while sitting strapped to a chair.
Well he's a gaian. I mean, Ritsuka. He is kusarian as well. And he works for KNF pretty often. But shhh!
Look at this:
the arrogant man Wrote:I hear you have helped our forces several times in various occasions
See?? ^^
I had to mention it somewhere so that people wouldn't be confused.