The Seeker

[Not Espi]

feedback on the story from this thread
http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=52673

it's actually a build up of my nomad application story, working on pt2

opinions so far? i look forward to opinions of outcasts or corsairs to point out the bad ideas in the first part.

[Corsair]

Very well written. I'll keep my eye on it. I like how you implemented the Nomads into the Outcasts' arrival on Malta.

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[Mounteblanc]

I agree with Corsair. However, there is the matter of captain Salazar. His name has an uncanny resemblance to that of Salazar Kiithe. And, they were both around at the time of the Sleeper ship launching, and were both on sleeper ships.

So, was that just a random name?

Oh, and shouldn't this be in the RP-Feedback section?

[Not Espi]

I agree with Corsair. However, there is the matter of captain Salazar. His name has an uncanny resemblance to that of Salazar Kiithe. And, they were both around at the time of the Sleeper ship launching, and were both on sleeper ships.

So, was that just a random name?

Oh, and shouldn't this be in the RP-Feedback section?

it was a randomly chosen name. i looked up 50 most used spanish surnames and just randomly chose 2 to use in the story. changing this name is a matter of seconds if someone has issues with it or if it causes confusion.

also, i didnt want to post the feedback thread in the rp section, where only stories should be, if however there is a special place for these kinds of feedback threads, i would like to ask the admins to move it there.

edit: ah i see it now. i havent noticed before. would one of the admins move this to rp stories feedback please?