I know the first part is long, but I'd like some feedback on my other posts as well, such as "The Rise of Jake Keller" and how it is progressing so far.
Added the first of the title pictures for the story showing a falling angel with black wings, depicting Leo's fall. A huge thanks to Sandara on Deviantart for letting me edit the picture with a title picture in it. The artwork is amazing. Added a little foreword too.
A bit of a bump too people as well who are reading, give me criticism in any form on the story, advice or anything really. Anything will be appreciated.
Retribution re-write has begun, The Rise of Jacob Keller will continue as planned. The overall basic story of Retribution will continue as it did in the previous model, except it will be in one post instead of spread out across several posts. It may also be slightly reduced in size, not sure on that part yet.
Let me know what you guys think so far...or just continue not to post as you have before. Either way.
As you some of you know, I've been absent for some time trying to get my life in order and out of the depression and thoughtless rage of a storm I was fighting in my soul, so I've let this slide a little bit.
However, I've come to a conclusion. The Retribution Chronicles, while an actual book series I am working on (three parts/books), on the Discovery forums they will be re-written in their entirety in a shorter format, while the longer formats will remain in the books I am writing (Retribution is almost completed). The shorter more compact versions will remain on Discovery for all to read at their leisure.
Writing extensive posts on the forums that span tens of pages the aren't logs or biographies kind of exhausts a lot of people's eyes and they will lose interest in the story. That is why I'm going to rewrite "Retribution" and change the story slightly and shorten "The Rise of Jacob Keller" down as well to a more controllable post. The first part will be completely rewritten as has already been noted on the forum. The second book, already in the process of being written, will simply take a slightly different path than it was going to and be shortened, while still maintaining it's original path that it was going to in the book portion that I am still in the process of writing.
Hope this answers some questions, if anyone had any, as to the storyline of the Retribution Chronicles. Hope it helps.
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