About Chronos

[JayDee Kasane]

Hello people. I have one biography that im working on, so I was interesting is it good? Should I keep it up with my current style, or I should change something in it, or not bother about it at all... Please if you want to - go READ IT, say your opinion, (no flood of cource) and if you also making good biographies tell me some advise. Im making it because I enjoy it, It keeps me train with english and etc... I hope you will enjoy my work and will help me with that

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[JayDee Kasane]

Bump?:):cool:

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[JayDee Kasane]

Another bump???

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[JayDee Kasane]

Hey people! You care only about flood? :(

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[JayDee Kasane]

Hey people! You care only about flood? :(

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[Johnathan Nox Carter]

Greetings. Well, what can i say... i've read what you made there.

It's nice... and somehow fits to the point of an AI. Although you should try to... fit the character to his name, you know, make him more related to things about time, as Cronos was the god of time.
One problem though, you need to improve your English.

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[JayDee Kasane]

Dont understand what you really mean by that, I made its story as some sort of messages and inormation that contains in AI Core database, all you see there is Chronos reports and all information about it. I made AI Core as story-tailer (white text in beginning and end of storys)
Well Im never said I have perfect english, but it is quite understandable for almost everyone. some things like articles or words need to be improved, I agree on that

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[JayDee Kasane]

Bump?:):cool:

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