A forgotten past, a new horizon...

[Johnathan Nox Carter]

Hello all.
I've just finished a good part of the biography of my primary character in freelancer. I was hoping now that other might want to read it and share their opinions... so maybe i could improve my skills in writing such texts.
I know it's sometimes boring to read much... but still it's not so big yet.

You can find it here: http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?...pic=114927

To all those who have read it:

• Please don't be harsh... it's still basically my first creation.
  
• Also, if any of you wonder "Did the idea of former ascended being came to you from Stargate?" then the answer is yes, but i did modify some of it. Also, everything else is purely based on my imagination or ingame events.
  

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