That pic that Novakiller edited out the background of? It was a great picture, but the style doesn't fit an Order commander much in my opinion. Her clothes looked very "Final Fantasy Black Mage", to me.
Shop around online for some anime, or edit her coloring and such to fit the Order's style better. Post it up when you have something.
Just jokes, that one you had someone remove the background from looked awesome i would definitely stick with that one. Doesn't really suit the order but its was awesomely rendered.