Aiden's Story - Discussion

[DarkOddity]

This is where I would like comments questions critiques ect posted for my ongoing RP story for "Aiden Patrick" Thanks :)

Main story thread located here.

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[Angel]

I got it all pretty much down.... :laugh:

Very good btw.

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Alignment:The Outcasts
Status: Retired
Personal Bio Click here
Current Ships:The BlackPearl
Base Of Operations:Pryde Villa, Planet Malta

[DarkOddity]

Hehe. The Pearl is making a presence in my story right now, guarantee it wont be the last time too. :)

Hitting up on a "followup" to the Hispania thanks to Aiden being exiled he didn't have much time to keep track of progress. :)

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[Wolfpack98]

Very nice. very very nice. Try not to over-do the "super power" thing so it doesn't get run to death :)

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[DarkOddity]

Hehe. Well I don't plan on adding the ability to fly or crap like that.. lol.

As Aiden mainly seeks the comfort and strength of the Aldebaran the augmentation really gives him more of a link to his ship. Now Isabell on the other hand is somewhat his "arm". You'll notice in chapters to come she'll be doing alot of his dirty work.

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[Nightfall]

'Oh no, they're becoming Outcasts!' Nightfall runs off to the docks 'aargh!'. The reincarnation of the Ampoliros is still in building... The Desperado can't face them alone... wanders what's up with Santa Ana?... Then he remembers the lot of Phantoms, The Dalamar, Ember (GC) and other allies... he calms down...

:lol:

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If the stars should appear one night in a thousand years, how would men believe and adore and preserve for many generations the remembrance of the city of God? - from 'Nightfall' by I. Asimov
The Outcasts consider Siniestre Nube a sacred place for several reasons. Early explorers discovered a jumphole within the depths of the cloud that leads to a strange world of ringed stars and strange craft. All ships in the burrial ground are placed facing that hole to honor the Alien Spirits. - An Outcast rumor

[DarkOddity]

lol Nightfall.

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