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[tazuras]

Well I just put up the first bit of RP about Philippe Renaud so I figure it was time. Feedback on any of the upcoming RP and in game actions of the group will be welcome here and very much appreciated.

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Progressive Bio of Philippe Renaud

Xavier Richelieu Back Story

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[dr lameos]

Loyalistes de Phillipe Renaud - congrats on an original name, much better than the boring BAF, LN, LR trend.

Philippe Renaud is a Gallic Prince who's parents were secretly members of The Council.

Wouldn't that make his parents the ruling Monarchs, or very closely related to them? I can't see a monarchy member with so much power wanting to effectively lose their own significance. Would it not be wiser to sway your relatives' decisions than oppose them through violent means?

He was smuggled out of Gallia by two caretakers who were Gallic secret service agents

again, secret service agents are the most unlikely forces to do such a job, due to loyalty. Afterall, they are elite, and take the most difficult, risky, and dangerous missions, for the monarchy.

As soon as Philippe informed Xavier of his decision Xavier transfered command of all his forces to Phillipe.

the guy has no battlefield or strategy experience, and has only been known for a week.

At the end of his speech he invited anyone who did not believe in his cause to leave and re-join the rest of the council forces. No one left.

That claims effective control over the whole faction, which I'm sure many would disagree with.


A little brief, but its a good start, with a few alterations and adjustments

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[tazuras]

Alright, gonna start fleshing it out now to help fill in some of these gaps. Thanks for the input, I hadnt even thought about that last one.

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[tazuras]

Alright, I filled in all the holes you brought up that I wanted to fill. The fix for the third one I plan to expand a little bit, it's kinda lame right now. As for the fourth one, there's more there that has not yet been revealed in the story, it's meant to throw up a flag. Also I added a link to the first part of Xavier's back story up top.

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[tazuras]

I am retasking this to serve as both a link directory and feedback forum. All feedback is still welcome and appreciated here. I have added a link to the newly created LPR encrypted communications network (unofficial message dump).

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[mwerte]

(LPR) Louis Albert, Council Bomber. Unsuccessful in combat thus far.

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