RP Help from any high ranking Order

[Anonymous User]

Your backstory sound good so far for me as well except the stuff omicron wrote.

In general storys are cooler in my opinion when it includes connection to some known charas.

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[Caedes]

Alright, so would it be ok to simply change Major Finn to Admiral Golanski?

I'm planning on typing up several short stories as sort of covert mission reports, so I'll be sure to confer with Omicron and n00blet on those.

I was also thinking of joining the primary fleet, I'll go apply now I think.

[Jeremy Hunter]

Good Luck.

Seeya in space =)

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May you ever walk in the Light, Shizune.

[jimmy Patterson]

marcus and jim are prolly gonna get along fine<my chars my fourm name>tho jim has past combat experence and training<liberty marine for 8 years>

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kudos tommeh for sig

[Omicron]

Alright, so would it be ok to simply change Major Finn to Admiral Golanski?

Feel free to change it.

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