Meanwhile, some feedback -might- be nice..
*nodnod*
I am terrible at these things.
edit: That, and it's only a prologue for a character who'll probably be part of some other story line, just establishing him as a "known" face for that purpose.
Ergo, depending on how that turns out, I'll write something more coherent and interesting.. or at the very least better structured/written for whatever happens afterwards.