Continue where others failed:
- Retrieving provisions for the Corsair Empire via looting, pillaging and trading
- Trying to establish relations and acquiring informations
Faction idea:
The Pink Unicorns of Death is a synonym.
We are Corsairs, we are female.
The Empire needs support, we Corsiars need to enhance.
Too many of our husbands died out there trying to hold up our dignity and honour!
Killed by outnumbered forces, by backstabbers or worse: Traitors.
We are the answer - we are Corsair!
Fear us Hessians who think you can invade our home and threaten our children!
Our proud forces defeated you in no time.
As an answer you will now see OUR revenge.
You dare to frighten our precious?
Never send a boy to a woman's job.
Our military destroys your ships.
We will destroy your families and teach your breathens the tune of Santa Muerte.
All credits to John for this great idea.
He's working on some nice and dandy background RP.
I did that basic RP stuff - because I am what I am.
From my side we could tighten this RP a lot to bring back what this server needs:
Real mature RP
But there is soo much young folks around which we need to take care of...
PS:
Quite a while since OUR last RP idea - called RHA.
-Finsterwehr
In case you missed why the last thread about this ended up in Flood and then locked (even in Flood), you might want to reread the whole here, most importantly the last post.
I gave you the thread write up to read over. NOT to post.
AND you didnt post everything there but cut 3/4 of it.
I suggest removing it until its complete in the process and we dont get comments such as what Thyrzul said thinking he knows whats going on here (which he clearly doesn't).
Edit: Excuse me grumpyness i had a really rough night sleeping on my desk at school overnight and i ache all over.
That's why I've posted this RP idea from my side of view - as announced by the way.
Focus is on the RP, based on solid experiences.
As far as I remember one major point of argue was the lack of seriousness.
My idea is well funded and not just 'an idea'.
It's not perfect but I'll try to advance.
While I did your first attempt as serious, JOHN.
How about you take into consideration that you are dealing with minors and adults alike?
This one by me is serious, even that I'm not a writing person.
But I like to RP and found this idea great.
Again, i gave you it to read and not to post.
why do you think i hold off posting it for so long?
Im getting confirmation from higher ups i know.
Again there was already the thread before for discussions. We know already all we need from the community that waits and asks for threads to be moved to flood so that can trash it and spam it.
"Oh momma nOmnomnOm, daddy dragonlancer, please don't fight over me. I know I was a mistake you made when you were just trying to have fun."
But Siriusly:
First impressions are lasting impressions. The best you might be able to manage without scrapping it entirely is renaming to "Cuerno de la Muerte", or something, then adopting a non-pink unicorn as your symbol. Drop the subservient aspect of your female RP and consider a tag that isn't an emote. This will probably be the most constructive, supportive feedback you'll get.