"Deception, Corruption. and... Love?" Comment thread

[Blackstarr]

Story link: Here

XD.... flame and comment away

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[Laowai]

Not a bad start..... would outcasts actually be able to land troops on Crete? either way, interesting.

will wait and see where it goes!

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[Saigo.Watanabe]

i enjoyed reading it, waiting to read more of the story:D

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[thierry007]

its a good story i want to read moar of eet nau :P

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Yey Planning on going back to the RoS With a leash and collar arround Mah Neck yey. And Will be Active in GRN and EFL... [Once i start playing again]

[Muleo]

Blacky, you left the Corsairs because of your own choice, you betrayed the Corsairs. And now you go RP as if Sephardi betrayed and tried to have you killed? Good going.

I'm not even going to try and point out all the factual errors.

[MB52]

History is often twisted/modified by those who write it...

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I’ll carry this flag
To the grave if I must
Because it’s flag that I love
And a flag that I trust

[Muleo]

History is often twisted/modified by those who write it...

Aye, especially when the person writing it is ashamed of, and wants to hide what he's done in the past.

[Orin]

It just... I don't know. I have to be honest, from what I read, I just don't like it.

The betrayel scene, being about all that I read, is really lacking in any detail whatsoever. And it's really rushed. It's like, flew into the cloud, oh no! You're Outcast blood, you die now.

The believability is awful. I'm sorry.

[Muleo]

I suspect it was just rushed to provide a vague RP explanation for why his character defected from TBH to SOB.

Though what bugs me the most about it is, that it's pretty much impossible to be half outcast (without knowing it) because you'd be genetically addicted to Cardamine.

[Zelot]

My problem with this is, I don't particularly like being made a murderous evil person without my knowledge. I know you asked on the TBH site way back when you started if you could us some of our names in your story, but I had no idea that would make my character and attempted murderer. Perhaps when you do something like this you should use a generic name, not a specific one to someone one the forums or in-game, unless you talk it over with them and get their ok on what you are doing with their character.

I dont really mind being a bad guy, but I dont like having to find out after the fact by someone say "hey did you see what you did in Blacky's story?" The courteous thing to do, would have been to PM me and tell me what you were doing.

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