Hehe. Yeah, pretty much anyone I RP with in the game gets added to the story. Ol' Doc Martin will be just fine if Carter doesn't get too attached...otherwise it could get ugly:D
Nice story, though I'd be careful as regards research findings. Sometimes people "find" things ain't there and somehow expect us to take them for granted, which quite naturally falls short and never really does. Often enough if you are uncertain it's best to ask first and get clarifications. But overall I like it.
What? Then Alyson will come back to find the Scientists winning a Nevada civil war against the Naval officers, with their superior nomad-derived firepower and special chem-lab concoctions. Then Alyson will find some maintenance opening to get into the ship. There, she will have to go rescue Captain Stevenson, currently being held by the evil duo of Carter and Martin. On the way, she forms a rag-tag but spunky group of misfits and rejects, who miraculously overcome bitter hatreds and conflicts about their upbringing and socio-economic status, in order to form a spirited and cohesive impromptu commando force that ultimately finds and rescues the captain, discover that Carter and Martin had actually just been posessed by Nomads, kill all the Nomads, and then throw a big celebration with plenty of singing and dancing. And after that's all over Alyson flies off into the sunset leaving behind a jaunty wink and a blown kiss. But who was it for?
' Wrote:Nice story, though I'd be careful as regards research findings. Sometimes people "find" things ain't there and somehow expect us to take them for granted, which quite naturally falls short and never really does. Often enough if you are uncertain it's best to ask first and get clarifications. But overall I like it.
So ask about the Nomad things and such? Is that what you mean?
Glad you liked it anyhow.
' Wrote:What? Then Alyson will come back to find the Scientists winning a Nevada civil war against the Naval officers, with their superior nomad-derived firepower and special chem-lab concoctions. Then Alyson will find some maintenance opening to get into the ship. There, she will have to go rescue Captain Stevenson, currently being held by the evil duo of Carter and Martin. On the way, she forms a rag-tag but spunky group of misfits and rejects, who miraculously overcome bitter hatreds and conflicts about their upbringing and socio-economic status, in order to form a spirited and cohesive impromptu commando force that ultimately finds and rescues the captain, discover that Carter and Martin had actually just been posessed by Nomads, kill all the Nomads, and then throw a big celebration with plenty of singing and dancing. And after that's all over Alyson flies off into the sunset leaving behind a jaunty wink and a blown kiss. But who was it for?
Oh, and they find a puppy too. Of course.
I'm sure thats the storyline to Scooby-Doo...but I can't be sure. Wont bother the poor dog, he's had a rough life.
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