RP Feedback; JMScomp

[JMScomp]

Hello all, and thanks for giving this a read.

I now have five permanent characters. They are as follows.

The four from my story:
*Jarach' - The Leader. He joined the Outcast militia due to their favorable political position keeping him separated from the rest of Sirius, as well as a use for his skills. (may change soon)
*Jadaan - Jarach''s brother. He became a trader, eventually earning enough to begin his own bank (Leviathan Bankers Communications Center). Uses a false history as a Zoner born in Omega - 3 whenever asked, and while he does have contact with Sirians through his business, most often has his employees handle things.
*Kri'en - The youngest of them. Posed as an explorer for several years. Flies among the populous as a freelancer. Doesn't often converse with Sirians, though will reply if hailed (no need to be rude). He has though, made some ties with the Junkers.
*Aj'enel - Not yet introduced but nearly everything for her is planned out. It's just a matter of money (by which I have to trade, which I dislike due to little-to-no RP value present). For now I'll continue to leave her as a mystery, though her ties to the others are the most interesting of all of them (possibly with the exception of Jarach', being his personality and history).

My newest addition is Brother Uriah. A monk of sorts. Born into Bretonian nationality, he travels all of Sirius spreading peace in an effort to preserve human life. He even travels with no weapons as weapons have only one use, to harm others.


This is a free-for-all thread. Negative opinions are just as welcome as positive, just please leave the spamming at home, and keep it civilized. You can ask any and all questions here as well, and I'll happily answer them.

I have now posted bios for all of my characters. You can find links to my Character Biographies, bank, and story thread in my signature.

Thanks for looking, and pleasant RPing.

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Welcome to Leviathan Bankers : : Leviathan Bankers Feedback Thread

The story of Jarach', Jadaan, Kri'en, and Aj'enel : : My RP And Story Feedback Thread : : My Character Bio's

[darthbeck]

nothing bad to say about you're Roleplay. ( for all those who dont know, i am AI|Avenger )
great job.

if i could use my thumbs on the forum, you get two of them

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<span style="font-family:Century Gothic">Violence is Golden</span>

[JMScomp]

This feedback thread now encompasses another of my players as well, Brother_Uriah.

I'll be remaking the first post and thread title to reflect this shortly.

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Welcome to Leviathan Bankers : : Leviathan Bankers Feedback Thread

The story of Jarach', Jadaan, Kri'en, and Aj'enel : : My RP And Story Feedback Thread : : My Character Bio's

[lw'nafh]

Great fun interacting with ya mate:D

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[Bauer]

It was fun following Jarach' with my Freelancer and the RP was great. Good work.

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[10:10:28 AM] Josh (Dejavu): Bauer is legendary to the LPI, I joined because I wanted to be that epic.

[ryeguy146]

You know I enjoy your RP, I fly with you all the time. But get the new content we've been working on up! Or are you planning on releasing a large amount at a time?

Anyway, anyone reading this, I highly suggest reading up on JMSComp's stories. Excellent story telling, enjoyable characters; this is an example of what I like to read and what I like in a story.

That said, my only suggestion is trying to play a character that isn't afraid of his past and a recluse. It's fun. Do it, you know you want to!

[JMScomp]

Thanks for the feedback. Much appreciated to know that I'm doing well.

Oh, and to ryeguy146, I've been working on it. Should see a post in an hour or so.

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Welcome to Leviathan Bankers : : Leviathan Bankers Feedback Thread

The story of Jarach', Jadaan, Kri'en, and Aj'enel : : My RP And Story Feedback Thread : : My Character Bio's