' Wrote:Only two suggestions: if you look closely (maybe tune up the brightness in order to see it), the edges of the Barrier nebula layer are visible and give it a cut-off and artificial look ('specially left of Edinburgh and below Dublin and Omega-47).
Ah, so that was it. On my Desktop LCD I really couldn't tell what you meant, but on my laptop screen it does look silly. I'll try to brighten up the other screen, to prevent any future errors:P
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I wanted to ask for some feedback on my new creation. Before you say so, I know, Dervin is ugly. I intended that. I do feel that his head is a bit awkward though, suggestions on how to fix it would be welcome.
Comments, constructive criticisms?
Edit: Ohh, I already know I want to widen it out for less clutter, that will make me happier anyway. Hair needs fixed too. What else?
' Wrote:I wanted to ask for some feedback on my new creation. Before you say so, I know, Dervin is ugly. I intended that. I do feel that his head is a bit awkward though, suggestions on how to fix it would be welcome.
Comments, constructive criticisms?
Edit: Ohh, I already know I want to widen it out for less clutter, that will make me happier anyway. Hair needs fixed too. What else?
His head might be less awkward if the man had a neck.He's a floating head!:D
Maybe think about a subtle bit of texture on the ship windscreen?As it is it's just a flat grey.