"Procurator" Battleship Model

[Bobthemanofsteel]

It doesn't... Look Corsair at all, to be honest.

The Corsairs way of capship design is to make you tremble in fear at the very thought of their multi horned beasts. It's supposed to instil fear into their enemies.

Yours is a much more... industrial design, and I have to agree with Tazuras in turn, very Junker like.

Note; IMHO

[Curios]

D:

In what place its Jukiie?

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[Bobthemanofsteel]

The whole inter-house feeling I'm getting from it.
Plus it's got a lot of... bits on it.
Corsair ships are very... how shall I put it... smooth?
Look at your sig for example.

[Curios]

Legate is a dread, this one is light bs.

So, it have no actually signs of any house ship. generic bs. Lets follow the story, sairs got a osiris blueprints and develop own ships from it. So, to be honest too, i dislike legate. It have a lot of useless details on it, Sairs are known best shipbuilders, so, if you building the pretty nice ship you didn't overweighting it with additional and useless stuff like horns, spikes, giving it a shape of big arsed flying mountain =)

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[MrHeadphones]

I've never really been good at identifying the 'sair style, but I don't really like the angled little "wing bits" near the front which look sort of like /_/ in your meshes. They just don't seem very 'sairish

[HAF-C-Aldebaran]

More engines would be mounted,corsair style is capital ships with several engines.
looks good, a bit square but if as you say is the plans of the osiris.
but those two wings are not

[rhodes]

Sorry to say that doesnt look like a corsair ship. To be honest it doesnt even really look like a battleship more like a large cruiser.

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On a Comeback Tour

[Luis]

looks good as it is - enuff said


Edit: Instead of you guys telling him what it looks like, why not give him ideas to make it better and more of a Corsair BS.
Curios, remove the 'fins' - remake the bridge(s) to make it look inward instead of an outward bridge.

Add one more engine if possible, scale it a bit bigger add more details and then compare it to another BS from FL.

[Chase]

I know they already have one but no one else thinks it looks extremely Bounty Hunter-esque? Look at the engines, I can definitely imagine the hunters, who I think originated in Texas, basing a big bad cruiser/BS on Liberty design?

Really love the ship though, good frame.

Oh and if you wanted to play off of that idea, just make a vertical extension from the bottom or top, like the original Piranha?

Edit: About making it more "Corsair"; I picture corsairs using more of a winged ship so heres two options:
1. I know it might prove ineffective in combat, but see how this ship is segmented into three parts? Take the middle part and cut it up from the center and bring it out like wings? I've no idea how it will look but it might give it a more 'sair feel?
2. Hell take the whole thing and gut it like a fish?
3. Take a look at the Praetorian and use a more rounded style like on the edges of the wings there. For example on the little winged parts on the rear of your ship. Maybe as like an armor style? Need to be rounded though.

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Golden Chrysanthemum | Gateway Shipping

[Curios]

looks good as it is - enuff said


Edit: Instead of you guys telling him what it looks like, why not give him ideas to make it better and more of a Corsair BS.
Curios, remove the 'fins' - remake the bridge(s) to make it look inward instead of an outward bridge.

Add one more engine if possible, scale it a bit bigger add more details and then compare it to another BS from FL.

Thanks, i though about 3 engines for first, but after i made it i find i extremely the same as Mako from behide, so i stoped at 2 engenes, but bigger then those 3, actually this 2 engines = 2.5 smaller engines i made.

About wings, so, i could stylize them more, though they are much bigger then i have in my plan drowned at paper =)

And about bridge, what exactly to change? So, i can make smaller windows to make ship looks bigger. But actually it's not a windows =)

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