My first model

[ALS20]

This is my first model, working about 1 hour at it
Tell me what i should do better

[Cawdor]

well, posting a picture of it would be a good start.

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[Grail]

I like it... great design but where is the picture?

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LWB The Unioners Cryer~

[Mao]

I can see some Phantom lines in it... or nomad...

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[sean24]

He posted a picture but its so poly intensive that it blends into the background.

//no but in all seriousness (because this is not Flood) I will edit this post once there is a picture

[swift]

Maybe it's got an inbuilt cloaking generator... Lay off the man, guys.

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[Cosmos]

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[Geromix]

@ALS20- You forgot to post the link. Would certainly like to see what you have made.

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[Bobthemanofsteel]

Looks nice, although I have some issues with the overall design.
Perhaps a bit more detail would work?

[ALS20]

i am sorry for that
i created another post were i puted the links
Didnt knew that i already created this post
Sorry for that