[FEEDBACK] Prysin's Characters

[Prysin]

So i decided to get a feedback thread set up for my most beloved chars in terms of their RP. Darth Sidious, my Outcast main char, was created around august/setptember 2009. He has been my longest existing character and also my main user.

Bit random info:
Flies either a LHX-F1A Bayonet Lane Hacker Heavy Fighter or
he will be commanding his flagship, the MNS-Razorspine (Ranseur Dreadnought).

The roleplay story for this character, although extremely outdated, can be found here:
Birth of a captain, aboard the Razorspine

The expansion RP within Bretonia, which im currently working on can be found here:
Creating Relations

Various information about the Leeds docking rights can be found here:
To the Bretonian Foreign Office
TO: Bretonian Armed Forces & Bretonian Intelligence

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Due to ADMIN decision and actions, the biography of Everlyn Lynx is no longer publicly available. HOWEVER, you may request it through SKYPE. Do not expect me to reply anytime soon.

As admins has stated many times, What happens on skype is out of their juristiction.

My skype is: Prysin


[color=#FFFF00]If you got any questions regarding either, just raise them here ^^

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[Jeremy Hunter]

Erm...the 18+ is kinda...useless.

Anyways.

Eve's story is good. A nice read, though the descriptions I thought were a bit too...extreme for here imho.

But its well thought out and gives an insight to conditions Eve has to go through on Java.

I look forward to any ingame encounters with her (i avoid Alpha and OC cap ZOI in general).

Keep up the good work!

-Jeremy

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May you ever walk in the Light, Shizune.

[Prysin]

Well, i did warn them, however i feel like it give the massive wall of text some exitement.

Eve's story isnt by far near complete, this is merely the part before the colonials... and at the moment im working on the final events leading up to her entry into the Colonial Republic.

I am however glad that you liked the story. Hopefully more people found it an interesting read too.

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[Jeremy Hunter]

Next part is very sad, but still beautifully written.

I bet that is why she's a CR under our resident Wunderwaffe?,

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May you ever walk in the Light, Shizune.

[Prysin]

Next part is very sad, but still beautifully written.

I bet that is why she's a CR under our resident Wunderwaffe?,

wait and see... the story shall unfold after iv'e had a good nights sleep

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[Jeremy Hunter]

I hate waiting.

Impatience.

*waits*

You done yet?

=P

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May you ever walk in the Light, Shizune.

[Prysin]

give this a shameless bump in 10 hours time and we'll see

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[Jeremy Hunter]

I'll bump it a bit later, I try to sleep in on Sundays.

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May you ever walk in the Light, Shizune.

[Jeremy Hunter]

Shameless bump on request :D

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May you ever walk in the Light, Shizune.

[Prysin]

soon done with next part. seems like it will be a bit longer then expected...

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