Alright, just had an idea... Take the prison liner completely out of the image and put another pole dancer (a copy of the other side) in it's place. Also move the quote to the bottom of the image and center it (also make it a bit bigger?). Center the 'Bar & Grill' under the main title and center all of that text in the middle between the pole dancers (Make sure it's still at the top of the image however). Could you also post the new twice, once with the new rectangle in it, and once without it please?
oooh, the purple is nice! Could you also do something fantastic with the pole? It's currently looking a little bland in the color and quality department.