I'm sorry, I'm not going to delete anything here. You posted an intent to form a faction and while one or
two comments are a little off hand, the general gist is more than on the mark I feel ...
Hoodlum
Some say he is a proud member of: "The most paranoid group of people in the Community."
Despite being able to tell it is proper ettique when forming a faction to list these things, in as much and proper detail as you can. It makes for a more professional feel over all, and I regret to inform you that your faction concept is less than professional in my eyes. Maybe if you refine it, go over it again and re write some portions it will integrate better, but for now I don't see this faction in Discovery.
Listen, neither I nor anyone else here is trying to ruin you or your thread, you posted a faction and we gave critique, this should have been expected. So please, don't go cry bloody murder because you aren't liking what you're hearing, I'm not trying to start a flame war with you. I and most everyone else was trying to offer creative and helpful criticism.
Sorry, I just said no above. You chose to post a recruitment thread without an intent one. Now I Like people
to have a say in who they have to interact with within their own roleplay, and to be able to give a bit of feedback to.
Take this as that chance, seen as you missed the other part out ...
Hoodlum
Some say he is a proud member of: "The most paranoid group of people in the Community."