The old version you're using with her in that pose is somewhat better due to the fact that in this one she's got an almost unnatural glow about her. Plus the edges (for example, look at her hair) are kinda akward.
Hmm, you should try the filter "Bad dream" on the background, see what that does.
Nice one Mr San, apart from the middle console which looks a little cartoonish the overall effect is good.
My latest edition of first element
Background reverted, I never liked that artificial one I made anyway, too much of a mess. She's more natural in her original setting. Most effects are transfered over and a few more circles are added.