Kamida Family - Feedback

[Arctic95]

Hey, a friend and I have come up with an idea for a small noble family in Kusari which were quite eager to put in place.

I've written up the bio and hopefully its clear enough, although any stuff which you think its lacking or could be improved on please let me know, as i'm eager to make it as clean cut as possible.

Also any questions with regards to it, or issues you have about it are also welcome.

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New Info:

As well as the bio page I have also recently written up a page in the wiki.
I'm not too sure if it cover our considered group well enough so if anyone could give any insight into their thoughts and opinions i would be extremely grateful.

Wiki Page

As always any feedback is appreciated, and thank you in advance for any thoughts or opinions!