Haph's Character feedback

[Haphestus]

so lately Ive been trying to do more RP stuff and i figured i wanted to hear some feedback constructive criticism or general GG although i kinda prefer the first.
My Characters
Liberty Navy:

~Jorzza Haphestus Clark
[LN]-Jorzza.Clark (and alts)
[LN]-LNS-Blue.Ridge
[LN]-LNS-Lake.Tahoe
~Josephine "Josie" Alibrandi
[LN]-LLS-Arleigh.Burke

Rogues

~ Bubba Gambon
LR-Fluffy.Moonshine
LR-Fluffy.Boomshine

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