(09-10-2014, 03:36 PM)Captain_Nemo Wrote: If you have a problem with the manner in which I Role Play please use the Feed Back page I created. Further more please take the time to read my role play before a. saying something that I haven't done, and b. calling my role play crap
I don't mind that my SRP is being used as the example in this thread. I will mind if you choose to bash my style of playing this game openly. This isn't the place to do that.
Brushing off a well reasoned argument with "this is not the place for feedback" and "educate yourself before you bash my rp" but without actual counter arguement to the subject is not the best way to retain your credibility.
For the record, I've read all roleplay prior to you submitting the SRP in all the threads you linked in the SRP, and not even a faint hint I found about how Squigs acquired the l'Ane. All I found was that you noted in your .:j:. app that Steve's adoptive family was non-Gallic, subtly hinting (without any clarification though), that he might have been born as a Gallic, but that is again quite shaky if we add being born in 795 AS and on Barrier Gate Station. And that one sentence about said unknown family contact in your SRP app. That's all, no further roleplay about getting the ship.
Believing you may have done a bit more than what's visible and being able to provide actual evidence to support your defense are two entirely different things, and I don't think people care too much about mere beliefs here. Teerin listed a lot of gaps in your roleplay (or the lack of it), and told you what's wrong. I am yet to see you address his points, but I'm eagerly waiting your response on them, should you have any.