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Oh jesus christs

you weren't kidding about that faction logo

I could not be facepalming harder

yay brain cell damage!

the faction logo in teh beginning was like that since i was going for a light faction.... but now its more serious with a lighter tone still that I want to keep so yeah.... logo will change later when i have time to change it and IF there is anything better

Honestly... I understood 60% of that.... and your whole point is that a male made this faction?

*yawns*

I need to start writing in a more concise and plain manner. Let me explain my post.

As soon as I clicked on this thread my WiFi failed. Higher forces attempted to save me, but alas, I had to see it. (Clearly you see this indicates a light-hearted approach to the matter. Or do you consider "higher forces" serious? xD)

Anyhow, this faction is most certainly not "girly" or "womanly". (I make a claim that contradicts your claim that this is a faction of female characters. It is true, however, that I did not make the distinction between characters and players clear. I meant characters, ok? Ok.)

Every single girl I know listens to some hardcore music genre, smokes weed and resides on internet forums so abominable I don't even dare visit them. They all make me look like a (insert filtered word) bronie. (I go on and, in the well known Disco manner (mind you that the tone is still not serious), attempt to substantiate the claim that this is not a "girly" faction by giving a RL example. I then mention Bronies in an attempt to make it clear to you that I'm still half-joking.)

No wonder I don't get any. FL forums does not hardcore person make. (To further emphasise the frivolous nature of my post I make a joke of myself. Mildly humorous effect was intended.)

Judging from these observations, I have to conclude that, sadly, it appears to be a manly faction, which is no wonder for it was created by a male. (In a pseudo-intellectual tone I say that it is a manly themed faction. And because this is NOT the case (see the definition of bronie) I imply that you yourself are a fan of pink/rainbow themed stuff. You were to combine this with my previous statements and realise that I pretty much: a) didn't intend this to be overly serious b) think that a ship covered with skulls of dead Outcasts would be what a true female crewed ship would look like c) you're a bronie xD


Honestly... I understood 60% of that.... and your whole point is that a male made this faction?

XD XD XD OK good guess (y) good job you deserve a pat on the back. Its not like almost everyone in this community is a guy anyway, right?

and also

its a girl character faction.

get it right, son!

You got all that.... from what little that you wrote...

this is what I think that you thought:

"Oh look im gonna just say i was joking throughout the whole post."

Here is an idea. If you just wanted to call me a bronie then spit it out. Don't turn corners. Common man.
*ugh sigh*

Again, thx for the bumps!

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