That's why I've posted this RP idea from my side of view - as announced by the way.
Focus is on the RP, based on solid experiences.
As far as I remember one major point of argue was the lack of seriousness.
My idea is well funded and not just 'an idea'.
It's not perfect but I'll try to advance.
While I did your first attempt as serious, JOHN.
How about you take into consideration that you are dealing with minors and adults alike?
This one by me is serious, even that I'm not a writing person.
But I like to RP and found this idea great.