So, since the stakes were raised, I felt bad not giving it my all. Therefore, I took in most of the suggestions posted by others, re-did the narrations, fixed some of the time-music inconsistencies and improved the sound and video quality. Also added a new outro. I request that my previous submission (http://discoverygc.com/forums/showthread...pid1620807) be retracted. I hope it's okay for me to still have it there as a comparison but I don't want that video to enter the competition.
Thanks!
Looking good! Entries has been swapped, good luck with the voting panel!