Commissar's Feedback

[Commissar]

Wow. Thank you guys for the feedback. I'm really glad that you've enjoyed the slightly-addled results of my consuming quantities of tea that are likely sufficient to float a small warship. Discovery's been a tremendous incentive to write, and I'm hugely grateful to have the opportunity to write with all the awesome folks who have RP'ed with me. You know who you are, people in this thread. I'm on holidays for a week longer, so on we go!

As Rod suggested, I'm also working on curbing a lot of the excess detail that tends to bog down pacing, too. So with any luck we'll find a happy medium sometime soon.

A quick formatting note. I've changed the first post to the handy new [pi] tags instead of the old indent ones, so hopefully it should be less broken in widescreen now. Maybe.