Not bad, however, there are some aspects that could be improved:
-Using the word1/word2 is nice and useful, however, try not to overuse it. Using word1/word2/word3 is, in my oppinion, overdoing it.
-Nomad speech does not prevent you from using connectors. Don't be afraid of saying "ours be harmless" or even "ours are harmless", instead of "ours harmless".
-It is nicer to describe factions rather than naming them. Just as an example, you could call The Order "Lightleast", "Spawn~of~Toledo", "Lightsucker", etc.